You're welcome, I enjoy critiquing artworks^^ I have never heard of that programme, I always use photoshop myself so I guess that's different:P Oh no I didn't say anything about you having an unsteady hand, it was more of a general remark^^; But, practice makes perfect:)
thanku!!!
..i use normal pencil on sketchbook pro for lineart .. i guess its soft by default ....and yeah the biggest problem is that my hand is not steady...i'm working on that hopefully i'll improve :3
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thanks for taking the time to critique!!! :]
Music Fairy (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 11/14/10 | Reply
Hi, I saw you requested critique so here you go:3 I hope I'm not offending you or anything.
First of all, you did a great job on the details. The hair, the flame designs, folds in the clothing... very good^^ The lineart looks very clean overall, but it's a bit of a shame that there are still some unnecessary lines on the arms (especially around the elbows). Also, the entire thing looks a little fuzzy, I'm assuming you used a soft brush? My advice to you is to use a hard(er) brush if you want an even cleaner lineart. However, it must be said (I noticed this when I used it myself) that especially if your hand is not very steady, the hard brush can give a rather pixelated effect... So it's up to you, really:P All in all, I like the character and sword design! *hugs*
SaxGirl
Music Fairy (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 11/14/10 | Reply
@Carbon Frost:
You're welcome, I enjoy critiquing artworks^^ I have never heard of that programme, I always use photoshop myself so I guess that's different:P Oh no I didn't say anything about you having an unsteady hand, it was more of a general remark^^; But, practice makes perfect:)
Carbon Frost
Senior Otaku+ | Posted 11/14/10 | Reply
@SaxGirl:
thanku!!!
..i use normal pencil on sketchbook pro for lineart .. i guess its soft by default ....and yeah the biggest problem is that my hand is not steady...i'm working on that hopefully i'll improve :3
....
thanks for taking the time to critique!!! :]
SaxGirl
Music Fairy (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 11/14/10 | Reply
Hi, I saw you requested critique so here you go:3 I hope I'm not offending you or anything.
First of all, you did a great job on the details. The hair, the flame designs, folds in the clothing... very good^^ The lineart looks very clean overall, but it's a bit of a shame that there are still some unnecessary lines on the arms (especially around the elbows). Also, the entire thing looks a little fuzzy, I'm assuming you used a soft brush? My advice to you is to use a hard(er) brush if you want an even cleaner lineart. However, it must be said (I noticed this when I used it myself) that especially if your hand is not very steady, the hard brush can give a rather pixelated effect... So it's up to you, really:P All in all, I like the character and sword design! *hugs*
~S.G~
Blue Latte
Curious Dreamer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 11/11/10 | Reply
What a great blade master and very cool sword XD
Thanks so much for your dedication! I love it <3
I believe that happy girls are the prettiest girls <3